Scratches

Apr. 1st, 2008 11:25 pm
randomling: A wombat. (Default)
[personal profile] randomling
This story was written for the The Awesome April Challenge.

Summary: Joey gets a little scratched up.
Warnings: Boybands, RPF, sex.
Also: Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] vaudevilles for beta - all mistakes are of course my own.

For [livejournal.com profile] ephemera_pop - happy birthday, honey!

Scratches

Joey rolled onto his back, slick with sweat, still panting and kind of fuzzy-headed from orgasm. He was slightly surprised that Chris hadn't run screaming from the room the second they were done.

In fact, Chris wasn't showing any signs of imminent freakout. He was looking down at his folded hands, harsh breaths dissolving into gasps of laughter. “Dude,” Chris said unsteadily.

“What?” said Joey.

Chris held up his left hand and turned it around in the air, so Joey could see the dark residue under Chris's fingernails. “Dude,” Chris said again, still laughing, “I think I drew blood.”

***

Chris chivvied Joey into the hotel bathroom. Joey, surprised all over again, may have made a comment about only needing one wife; Chris just raised an eyebrow and ordered him to turn around. Feeling well trained, Joey obeyed.

With Joey facing the basin, Chris ran his fingers down Joey's back, and over spots that turned out to be just a little tender. “Not so bad,” Chris murmured, and trailed his fingers further down. “You'll be fine.” Joey hadn't made a sound when Chris touched the scratches, but he gasped when Chris's fingertips found the sensitive spots just above his hipbones.

***

Joey moaned when Chris's tongue made contact with the very top of his thigh, the tip trailing inwards deliciously slow. Almost thirty-two, and he was getting hard again, like a horny teenager, the newness of Chris's touch electrifying him.

And Chris definitely wasn't freaking out. That would look a lot less like kneeling behind someone, hands on their hips, and teasingly licking up the inside of their thigh. Joey braced his hands on the basin, helplessly excited.

“Turn around,” Chris commanded. Joey obeyed. Chris swallowed Joey down: somewhere behind the burst of sensation, Joey was surprised a third time.

Date: 2008-04-01 10:43 pm (UTC)
ext_1650: (choey hug (vaudevilles))
From: [identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. Start the month off with a bang why don't you!?

I loved this, the idea of Chris marking Joey up? *shivers*

You're made of awesome. Awesome and unicorns!

Date: 2008-04-01 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, your feedback made me go, Eeeeeeeeee! [bounces]

I get to be made of UNICORNS. Gleeeee!

Date: 2008-04-01 11:20 pm (UTC)
sperrywink: (Chris is pretty too)
From: [personal profile] sperrywink
Yay, that was fantastic. I like Joey's thoughts about only needing one wife and liking the novelty of Chris.

Date: 2008-04-01 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :D

Date: 2008-04-01 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ephemera.livejournal.com
eeeeeeeeeeee!!!! THANK YOU!

Date: 2008-04-01 11:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
You're so very, VERY welcome.

And, ooh, Henry. :D

Date: 2008-04-02 12:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puszysty.livejournal.com
Very nice way to start the month of fic awesomeness!

Date: 2008-04-17 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you very much indeed! (And sorry for taking forever to reply to your feedback...)

Date: 2008-04-02 01:15 am (UTC)
frausorge: Joey Fatone in a green jacket, looking down and smiling broadly (the inward eye)
From: [personal profile] frausorge
That's gorgeous! I really like the way Joey's feeling of jadedness gives way more and more to this new experience.

Date: 2008-04-17 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm really glad it came off the way I wanted it to. :D

Date: 2008-04-02 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vaudevilles.livejournal.com
Wooooooooooooo! Oh yeah, oh yeah baby. That last line KILLS.

Date: 2008-04-17 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thaaaaaank you. Glad you liked it!

Date: 2008-04-02 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phaballa.livejournal.com
\0/

Choey is my least favorite NSYNC pairing, but I really liked this! Now write some mom fic :P

Date: 2008-04-17 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
LOL, the mom fic is coming. :D And I'm really glad you liked this, thank you!

Date: 2008-04-02 05:55 am (UTC)
adelate: Min Yoongi with his eyes closed on an orangey yellow background about to take a sip out of a yellow Teema coffee mug (Camp Sparkle!)
From: [personal profile] adelate
Oh, sweet. I really loved this a lot, Lucy. ♥

Date: 2008-04-17 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Eeeeee! Thank you so much, yay!

Date: 2008-04-02 12:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bououou.livejournal.com
Awww awesome!
I have a feeling April is going my favorite month.
This was cute and hot!

Date: 2008-04-17 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Ahaha. Yes, April is fast becoming my favourite month, too!

Thank you!

Date: 2008-04-02 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] llamabitchyo.livejournal.com
Mmmm... I didn't think Choey could be that hot!

Great fic!

Date: 2008-04-17 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Hee! Choey is very hot - one of my favourite pairings. And thank you!

Great icon, by the way. :D

Date: 2008-04-02 03:32 pm (UTC)
ext_9595: (nsync: a group icon! finally!)
From: [identity profile] bubbleforest.livejournal.com
YUM. That was really hot. Chris inspecting his markings, ohhhh yes. There's so much trust implied with that, from both sides. I loved this!

Date: 2008-04-17 08:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm thrilled you liked it! (And yes, I kinda like the idea of Chris looking at Joey's markings, too...)

Date: 2008-04-02 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kira-j.livejournal.com
You're so brave for going first!

Chris is full of surprises. I love Chris/Joey and this was cute and fun, bossy Chris made me want to cross and recross my legs, ahem.

Date: 2008-04-17 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Whee! Yes, Chris is definitely an unpredictable man. And yay for the crossing of legs!

Thank you! :D

Date: 2008-04-03 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ninjetti75.livejournal.com
Mmmmm, Choey. Very Nice!

Date: 2008-04-17 08:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
I love Choey very much indeed (as you may know from past RPGs).

Thank you!

Date: 2008-04-03 06:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] withdiamonds.livejournal.com
Choey always surprises me, because I don't think of it, yet when I see it, I love it. Very nice start to the month.

Date: 2008-04-17 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D

Date: 2008-04-03 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] imsinkingfast.livejournal.com
"Chris chivvied Joey into the hotel bathroom."

I don't know why, but your use of the word 'chivvied' has me in a giggling fit, lol! Very nice start to the challenge, ;-)

Date: 2008-04-17 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Ehehehe. I really love that word and it was awesome to have the chance to use it in fic. :D

Glad you enjoyed it, thank you!

Date: 2008-04-17 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! :D

Date: 2008-04-03 08:05 pm (UTC)
rikes: (Begging for more)
From: [personal profile] rikes
Hottest Choey EVAH.

Even Justin thinks so. :)

Date: 2008-04-17 08:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Heeeeee! Well, Justin would know. :D

Thank you so much!

Date: 2008-04-04 11:01 am (UTC)
nopseud: (pairings -- choey -- nopseud)
From: [personal profile] nopseud
Ooh, I like this! Choey is such a fabulous pairing, and this has so much Choeyness about it, with Joey expecting Chris to run, and Chris being all concerned. Also, hot!

Date: 2008-04-17 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you very much indeed, I'm so thrilled you enjoyed it! :D

Date: 2008-04-07 09:38 pm (UTC)
pensnest: very young Chris and Joey (Choey)
From: [personal profile] pensnest
I love these two - they're so *solid*. This feels right, and is yummy!

Date: 2008-04-17 08:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Yay! Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it. :D

Date: 2008-04-11 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenbat.livejournal.com
*applauds* Well done, hon. Very well done. :)

Date: 2008-04-17 08:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wanderingwombat.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! [bows]

Date: 2008-05-03 07:44 pm (UTC)
ext_872: eye with red flower petals as eyelashes (not s'posed to get sharp things in there)
From: [identity profile] bossymarmalade.livejournal.com
Feeling well trained, Joey obeyed

I love that line -- it says so much and yet leaves so much unsaid and implied, y'know? And the whirly mix of casual familiarity and something a little darker and more carnal is so well-done, keeping the reader somewhat off-balance. Very nice, and thank you for sharing it!

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