randomling: A wombat. (Default)
Lee ([personal profile] randomling) wrote2008-04-01 11:25 pm

Scratches

This story was written for the The Awesome April Challenge.

Summary: Joey gets a little scratched up.
Warnings: Boybands, RPF, sex.
Also: Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] vaudevilles for beta - all mistakes are of course my own.

For [livejournal.com profile] ephemera_pop - happy birthday, honey!

Scratches

Joey rolled onto his back, slick with sweat, still panting and kind of fuzzy-headed from orgasm. He was slightly surprised that Chris hadn't run screaming from the room the second they were done.

In fact, Chris wasn't showing any signs of imminent freakout. He was looking down at his folded hands, harsh breaths dissolving into gasps of laughter. “Dude,” Chris said unsteadily.

“What?” said Joey.

Chris held up his left hand and turned it around in the air, so Joey could see the dark residue under Chris's fingernails. “Dude,” Chris said again, still laughing, “I think I drew blood.”

***

Chris chivvied Joey into the hotel bathroom. Joey, surprised all over again, may have made a comment about only needing one wife; Chris just raised an eyebrow and ordered him to turn around. Feeling well trained, Joey obeyed.

With Joey facing the basin, Chris ran his fingers down Joey's back, and over spots that turned out to be just a little tender. “Not so bad,” Chris murmured, and trailed his fingers further down. “You'll be fine.” Joey hadn't made a sound when Chris touched the scratches, but he gasped when Chris's fingertips found the sensitive spots just above his hipbones.

***

Joey moaned when Chris's tongue made contact with the very top of his thigh, the tip trailing inwards deliciously slow. Almost thirty-two, and he was getting hard again, like a horny teenager, the newness of Chris's touch electrifying him.

And Chris definitely wasn't freaking out. That would look a lot less like kneeling behind someone, hands on their hips, and teasingly licking up the inside of their thigh. Joey braced his hands on the basin, helplessly excited.

“Turn around,” Chris commanded. Joey obeyed. Chris swallowed Joey down: somewhere behind the burst of sensation, Joey was surprised a third time.
ext_1650: (choey hug (vaudevilles))

[identity profile] turps33.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. Start the month off with a bang why don't you!?

I loved this, the idea of Chris marking Joey up? *shivers*

You're made of awesome. Awesome and unicorns!
sperrywink: (Chris is pretty too)

[personal profile] sperrywink 2008-04-01 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, that was fantastic. I like Joey's thoughts about only needing one wife and liking the novelty of Chris.

[identity profile] ephemera.livejournal.com 2008-04-01 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
eeeeeeeeeeee!!!! THANK YOU!

[identity profile] puszysty.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 12:00 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice way to start the month of fic awesomeness!
frausorge: Joey Fatone in a green jacket, looking down and smiling broadly (the inward eye)

[personal profile] frausorge 2008-04-02 01:15 am (UTC)(link)
That's gorgeous! I really like the way Joey's feeling of jadedness gives way more and more to this new experience.

[identity profile] vaudevilles.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 01:32 am (UTC)(link)
Wooooooooooooo! Oh yeah, oh yeah baby. That last line KILLS.

[identity profile] phaballa.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
\0/

Choey is my least favorite NSYNC pairing, but I really liked this! Now write some mom fic :P
adelate: Min Yoongi with his eyes closed on an orangey yellow background about to take a sip out of a yellow Teema coffee mug (Camp Sparkle!)

[personal profile] adelate 2008-04-02 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, sweet. I really loved this a lot, Lucy. ♥

[identity profile] bououou.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 12:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww awesome!
I have a feeling April is going my favorite month.
This was cute and hot!

[identity profile] llamabitchyo.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 01:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm... I didn't think Choey could be that hot!

Great fic!
ext_9595: (nsync: a group icon! finally!)

[identity profile] bubbleforest.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 03:32 pm (UTC)(link)
YUM. That was really hot. Chris inspecting his markings, ohhhh yes. There's so much trust implied with that, from both sides. I loved this!

[identity profile] kira-j.livejournal.com 2008-04-02 06:03 pm (UTC)(link)
You're so brave for going first!

Chris is full of surprises. I love Chris/Joey and this was cute and fun, bossy Chris made me want to cross and recross my legs, ahem.

[identity profile] ninjetti75.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 03:27 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmmm, Choey. Very Nice!

[identity profile] withdiamonds.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Choey always surprises me, because I don't think of it, yet when I see it, I love it. Very nice start to the month.

[identity profile] imsinkingfast.livejournal.com 2008-04-03 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
"Chris chivvied Joey into the hotel bathroom."

I don't know why, but your use of the word 'chivvied' has me in a giggling fit, lol! Very nice start to the challenge, ;-)
rikes: (Begging for more)

[personal profile] rikes 2008-04-03 08:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Hottest Choey EVAH.

Even Justin thinks so. :)
nopseud: (pairings -- choey -- nopseud)

[personal profile] nopseud 2008-04-04 11:01 am (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I like this! Choey is such a fabulous pairing, and this has so much Choeyness about it, with Joey expecting Chris to run, and Chris being all concerned. Also, hot!
pensnest: very young Chris and Joey (Choey)

[personal profile] pensnest 2008-04-07 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I love these two - they're so *solid*. This feels right, and is yummy!

[identity profile] ravenbat.livejournal.com 2008-04-11 12:29 am (UTC)(link)
*applauds* Well done, hon. Very well done. :)
ext_872: eye with red flower petals as eyelashes (not s'posed to get sharp things in there)

[identity profile] bossymarmalade.livejournal.com 2008-05-03 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Feeling well trained, Joey obeyed

I love that line -- it says so much and yet leaves so much unsaid and implied, y'know? And the whirly mix of casual familiarity and something a little darker and more carnal is so well-done, keeping the reader somewhat off-balance. Very nice, and thank you for sharing it!